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P: UPON A HILL ACROSS THE BLUE LAKE by Chocomix P: UPON A HILL ACROSS THE BLUE LAKE by Chocomix
There was a time I used to look into my father's eyes
In a happy home I was a king I had a golden throne
Those days are gone, now the memories are on the wall
I hear the songs from the places where I was born

Up on the hill across the blue lake,
That's where I had my first heartbreak
I still remember how it all changed
My father said,
"Don't you worry, don't you worry, child
See heaven's got a plan for you
Don't you worry, don't you worry now"
Yeah!

"Don't you worry, don't you worry, child
See heaven's got a plan for you
Don't you worry, don't you worry now"
Yeah!


HOLY BANANANANANANA 8D
FINALLY finished c:
This is my late (not very hrw hrw e.e) Birthday Present for dear *Yewrezz This shows her awesome Char Morrow, who all of you should know! 8D If not then just check Yews gallery haha =DDD :heart:
So I really really really hope you like it dear! 8D I gave my best ! :heart:
Also hehe I painted dat horn and I am so proud of myself lolz, shame on me T_T
So I hope you will see this when you wake up. =D
I know it's far from being perfect and not even close to being as awesome as your art is but.. well in six years.. kay? :3

Download for details pleezzzz =D
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Horse: [link]
Background: [link]

Everything else handpainted by me!

DO NOT STEAL THIS ONLY BELONGS TO :iconyewrezz: 8DDD :heart:
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First off I want to say this is just so lovely. :heart: It has such an amazing happy feel to it, yet relaxing with the fog.
From what I've seen of this character, you've captured her very well! But I think there's some things that could use a little improvement.
The thing that really stand out the most for me here is the horse is lacking detail and definition and looks really smooth and flat. Although smudging really is a personal decision for artists, often with every equine manipper having they're own style of smudging and preferred amount, I really think you smudged her too much here. Although details in the original horse stock are light, there was still so much you could have pulled out of it with a soft light airbrush or some form of detailing.
Another thing that kinda bugs me here is the tail, the beginning of the tail seems to be rested on the side of her butt rather than placed along the horse's tail bone, if you had erased a bit of it from the beginning it would have looked more natural. If you were trying to have the tail more flicked over to her side, I would recommend erasing the little line in the middle or the tail's arch, that's what make it look placed wrong, you also could have maybe put the tail more around the legs if you were trying to flick it around the side.
The hair itself looks very well painted, but I think it could use a few more shadows to create a more 'hairy' feel and could use a few fly aways and single strands here and there to make it look more loose and flowy.
The colour change is amazing, changing a white horse to any colour is often a difficulty most equine manippers struggle with, however you pulled it off very nicely.
The fog looks very natural considering it's hand painted, but it looks a little to 'soft'. Even though fog is very thing and fluffy, it still has some cloudy features to it, try using a fog/cloud filter on a separate layer and setting it to screen mode to get it more textured.
Now to stars.
Vision: 5 stars, you really pulled this character off nicely and the setting and theme is wonderful.
Originality: 4 1/2 stars, this is a theme I don't see often in equine manips, but I have seen it done before.
Technique: 4 stars, the manip is very well done, but the lack of detail bumped you down a lot, I think if you had defined the horse a bit more you could have gotten a full 5 stars.
Impact: 5 stars, I just absolutely LOVE the cheery yet relaxed feel of this whole manip.
Keep up the good work!
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:iconminako15:
kyaaaaaa >/////////< i love it i love it i love ittttt
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Chocomix Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much <3
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:iconminako15:
is the truth ^^
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blanket86 Dec 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so great ! Very good photo! Beautiful colours!
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Chocomix Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! :heart:
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Midnights-Horizion Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
This is absolutely Gorgeous! Applause to you:clap:

I'm thinking you need to Make a tutorial for your manes and tails! :giggle:
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Chocomix Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, thank you so much! :heart: I am actualy planning to do a mane and tail tut for christmas, although I am convinced that I fail at them :'D Well I had a poll and the majority voted for it, so if you want you can watch me, so you will get notified when I upload the tut, and if you then are satisfied you can unwatch me anytime you want =D
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Midnights-Horizion Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks that would be awesome! :D I would never un-watch you! I'm totally in love with your skills :giggle:
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Chocomix Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you so much it means a lot ^_^ :heart:
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:iconmidnights-horizion:
Midnights-Horizion Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem! I'll note you if i ever need your expertise on anything! ^.^
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